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Kings Of The Sky

Post by DJ. on Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:40 pm

Chapter 1

3 Pilots named Jack,Tom,and Jeremy start off as privates in flight school. They all want to the same thing,to be the best pilots that ever flew an aircraft. Jack the oldest one is in a more advanced class for fighter Jets, Tom the middle one, wants to be a helicopter pilot. Jeremy the youngest wants to be a specialized pilot for offering support against tanks and such. Each of the pilots have very different schedules and dont hang out much except when they have a little down time on the weekends. Jack being the oldest has harder classes due to his advanced classes early on,they involve him learning advanced manuevers and even some of the simple ones to get him back in the motions of flying. Tom is the above average pilot who isnt advanced as Jack but is still advanced enough to get him into learning about some of the more difficult maneuvers and strategies. Jeremy however is right at the average pilot who know the basics and some advanced stuff but wouldn't do very well when the classes got harder.

Chapter 2

After a year has passed and the men are along in their classes,when suddenly one day the siren goes off for immediate action.
Jeremy reports to his A-10 warthog,Tom gets in his Apache Longbow,and Jack reports to his F-16. The three pilots take off and are sent to different areas of the conflict. Jeremy is sent unknowingly to one of the more intense hotspots. Jeremy's area is crawling with tons of ground troops and tanks,along with reports of AA in the area. Tom is sent to one of the more average areas that his allies just needed a bit of air support to those pinned down. Jack's area of combat is mostly dogfighting.

Jack's area is immediately filled with enemy fighters. Jack has no idea that his F-16 will be up against some of the more advanced fighters in the world. He and his squad are up against multiple F-22s,Migs,and F-15s. His F-16 is outmatched by the F22,F15. The migs are just back up thankfully. His squad shoots down 2 out of the 4 migs easily with his R-77s.

Jeremy has trouble with the combination of AA,and tanks. Some allies arrive later on to help lower the number of ground troops. Eventually,the number of tanks decreases,but few are left and Jeremy is out of ammunition. On his way back to base for more,he doesn't see an incoming AA missile and is shot down behind enemy lines.

Tom's mission is quick,after he arrives he quickly decimates the opposition with his guns,Hell-Fire missiles and barrage of rockets. After his mission,he returns to base to refuel and relax,or so it seems...

Chapter 3

Jack continues to face off with the F22s/F15s, using every evasive air maneuver that He can think of to avoid the missiles and machine gun fire. The enemy fires a missile forcing Jack to use "The Immelmann", He comes out of the maneuver heading straight for the enemy. Jack fires his M61A1 20mm cannon and one AIM-9M Sidewinder.The missile hits the engine as Jack flies past him overhead,the cannon fire rips apart the wings and middle of the enemy jet. The enemy jets begins to turn downward and then explodes on impact of the missile.Jack watches for a chute and then regroups to take on the rest of the squad with his wing men.
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Jeremy deploys his chute and lands softly in the forest below. His chute is caught on the limbs,so He cuts the lines with a knife from his pocket. He falls to ground and rolls to keep from injuring himself.He hears scouts in the forest nearby and decides to take cover behind the huge oak tree. He waits patiently for the scouts to pass by and then takes our his knife and decides to take them out. Sneaking up behind the scouts he takes his knife and stabs one of them in the neck,and as the other one turns around he puts him in a headlock. He then stabs the other soldier in the chest,taking their clothes as a disguise and moves on through the forest.
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Tom returns home from his quick mission and decides to head to the debriefing. He is on his way there when is stopped by a fellow soldier. "Just got a new mission, Commander wants us to leave ASAP. Grab you gear and meet me at the chopper." Tom agrees and proceeds to get his gear when suddenly the base erupts in explosions and gun fire. Tom quickly turns around and see that the soldier he was just talking to is now dead. "Noooooo!" Tom yells, He runs to the commander's location. "Commander! I need a gun now!" Tom yells. "There is no time Tom,just get to a chopper and take out those bombers!" the commander screams above the explosions nearby. "Yes Sir!" Tom agrees and runs to the one of the few remaining choppers.


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Post by DJ. on Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:40 pm

Chapter 4

As Jack begins to regroup with squad He notices that there are no contacts on his radar.John radios his wing man "Did the contacts retreat?",his wing man replies "I don't know, I'm not sure they kinda just went off the radar after you left." John thinks of what could have happened to contacts,"Maybe the have some kind of jamming device nearby." John and his squad fly into the clouds for cover. Suddenly out of no where, John's wing man explodes into flames as a SAM hits him.John screams terror,"Nooooo!" He looks for a chute,doesn't find one then spots one on the distance.John gets on radio to squad "Squad,evasive maneuvers now! Fly high and retreat at once." John and his squad proceed to retreat.

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Jeremy puts on the disguise and continues through the forest. He eventually walks upon an enemy outpost with surrounding scouts and armor positions. Jeremy thinks to himself about what to do,"I wonder if I can flank them and slowly take out the outpost with some of that armor." Jeremy decides to go back and pick up the weapons from the fallen scouts in the forest. He then walks around the base through the forest and sneaks in the back door. He walks into the ammo room and stock up on ammo and weapons. He leaves the ammo room and walks towards the front of the outpost.He waits till coast is clear and then takes out the guard walking in the hallway disposing of his body in a closet.

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Toms gets into the chopper and starts it up. He takes off just another bomb blows up the nearby hangar with ammo and planes on standby. Tom flies towards the circling bombers firing his cannon and rockets. He manages to shoot one of the many bombers down. "I need some back-up here",Tom yells on the radio."We don't have many fighters left Tom,your gonna have to do the best you can",his commander replies. Tom slams his fist on side of the chair, "Time to take these guys down." He flies faster towards the bomber fixing to drop another payload head on,He fires his rockets again and they hit the wings along with the engines. The bomber flies out of control towards the ground and explodes. Tom see that he is running low on rockets,He switches to the cannon until he needs them.

Chapter 5

Jack and his squad begin to retreat. They reach the the tops of the clouds,and suddenly 2 fighters appear above them.Two members of his sqaud are shot down,chutes deploy.Jack yells on the radio, "They were above us the entire time!Evasive maneuvers,watch out for any more fighters as well."Jack rolls hard to the left and begins to follow the enemy fighters below him.The rest of his squad follows his lead.Jack shoots off a missile that zooms towards the enemy.The enemy pulls up and launches a flare,the missile is shoots past him. Jack continues to follow his enemy back into the clouds.Whats left of his five man squad follows him,as the last two fighters begin to pull up disaster strikes.SAMs suddenly appear from below ripping through the last two fighters.

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Jeremy slowly walks towards the front of the base.He pulls out his weapon and kills 2 guards.He walks outside towards the tanks and climbs in one.He arms the tank and begins firing at the enemy trucks and buildings. The enemy soldiers retaliate with shots from their AK-47s and SMGs. He uses the mounted machine gun to mow down the soldiers.Soon some of the enemies begin to launch RPGs at the tank,Jeremy is forced to abandon the tank.He gets out his gun and fight back for his life.Jeremy then manages to take out the small number of enemies remaining and runs to the radio building for help.He sets the radio to his allies frequency."This is Jeremy,I'm behind enemy lines.My location will be marked by smoke just north of the area I was fighting in."

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Tom continues to fight the swarm of bombers and few fighters with his chopper.He begins to run low on ammo for his gun."Sir,I'm almost out of ammo what shall I do"? His commander replies,"I don't know,wait! I just remembered. I have an extra emergency helicopter below one of the hangars near my office.Fly their,and I'll get it ready for you." Tom replies,"Yes Sir." He flies to the hangar and lands the chopper.Tom gets out and quickly gets in the Apache.He takes off headed towards the remaining bombers and fighters.He fires off some of his Stinger missiles hitting 2 bombers directly causing them to crash.He continues after the remaining bomber and 2 support fighters.
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Re: Kings Of The Sky

Post by DJ. on Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:40 pm

And now for the long awaited and probably not gonna be read that much chapter 6.

Chapter 6

Jack yells to the base,"Emergency,I need backup ASAP.My squad has been shot down behind enemy lines and I'm requesting an EVAC immediately.I'm on my way back to base for refueling and debriefing at once. My ETA is 1 hour.Over and out." Jack flies full speed back to base,when suddenly his alarm goes off. Its not just any alarm its his incoming missile alarm,he notices 4 missiles coming towards him from the west and east side. He thinks of a plan to avoid missiles and executes it at once. He pulls up releasing a stream of flares behind him. The missiles follow the flares causing them to collide with each other creating a huge fireball in the air.He pulls up harder on the stick and heads into the clouds pushing the limits of his aircraft. He speeds off back to base breathing a sigh of relief.

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Jeremy walks out of the ammo depot towards an empty tank on the outpost. He climbs in the massive tank setting an unset charge on the shells inside.He starts the tank up aiming towards the depot. The tank automatically loads a round into the barrel.The round slides up track into the chamber. He fires the round into the ammo depot,it erupts the sky with a huge explosion of fire and debris. He loads another round into the tank as he rolls over jeeps nearby.An alarm on the outpost is immediately sounded alerting the entire outpost of the situation. The tank encounters small arms fire and a few grenade blasts as it continues to move towards the exit of the outpost. As he leaves the outpost he sets the charge inside the tank. He turns the tank around heading for the communication building.

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Tom's fight with the 2 remaining fight heat ups,He flies under 3 bombers. Tom launches a rocket exploding on the left side of one of them. The bomber flies out of control turning hard right into the nearby bomber. Both bombers crash to the ground leaving the last bomber exposed and deserted. A support jet zooms on the scene of the mid-air crash. The jet fires his cannon grazing the side of Tom's Apache. The Apache easily maneuvers out of the way of the cannon. The jet is forced to zoom by and circle around to get behind it. Tom leads the fighter right towards the remaining SAM site on the base. The Apache pulls up as the jet comes down ramming straight into a SAM missile causing to explode and crashing into the remaining SAM site. Tom heads for the last defenseless bomber over the base.
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Post by DJ. on Tue Oct 20, 2009 6:23 pm

Chapter 7

Jack flies smoothly back to base and lands on runway. He gets out of the plane and walks towards the De-brief room immediately. He informs a fellow soldier on the rescue team before entering. Jack walks in and sits down at the table informing the commander of the events near the hot spot. The De-brief is over within 30 minutes,Jack walks out to see if the rescue squad has left yet.He asks the commander when they left,he replies "They left as soon as you told them,however I have some bad news." A look of shock appears over Jack's face as the commander continues,"The rescue squad was shot down as they came close by a couple of enemy jets that were tailing you from below.Thankfully,they managed to get s signal out before they left.They are all ok I believe,I don't know what happened after the chopper went down.All I know is I'm waiting for the area to cool down before I think about sending another team out. I don't wanna lose anymore men."Jack nods and walks off to his jet.He prepares it hoping to be an escort with the next team moving out of the area.

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Jeremy moves the tank towards the communication center straight ahead.As the tank gets closer and the amount of small arms increases he lodges the stick so the tank continues to move forward. He quickly jumps out of the tank and runs as the tank smashes the building and the tower. He detonates the charge and covers his head while running and dodging the bullets coming at him.He manages to escape into a Humvee and drive out of the outpost while the explosions continue. Jeremy hears and alarm go off as he drives off. He ditches the Humvee once he gets far enough away to escape any scouts nearby. He climbs a tree a good distance away from the Humvee after rigging the Humvee with a charge in case the scouts do find him. As he hears the scouts drive around the area past him he makes himself a hammock out of vines branches as night begins to fall over the dense forest. He lays down in the hammock before setting up a couple of traps for anyone wandering under massive tree.

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Tom comes out of the clouds on top of the bomber.He puts his finger on the trigger and clicks it twice.Two missiles come flying towards the bomber,the bomber's rear and wings explode.The bomber's payload explodes making any chance of getting out gone.Tom returns the chopper to the heli-pad and gets out. He walks towards the barracks,hoping to catch up on some needed rest from the days battle.As he enters the base,he hears the sound of a roaring missile zoom past the barracks.He runs outside yelling,"What now!?."
The missile hits a few rows of cars right near one of the main offices. The AA tanks,and AA missile sites are put on full alert at once.Tom runs to his car,and quickly drives to check on the damage of the area.The area is filled with smoke,fire,and screams of soldiers trapped under the cars.He gets on the radio and calls for a medic while doing his bed to tend to the trapped soldier.The medic arrives within a few minutes and asses the injuries of the soldiers.Tom walks to other cars checking the soldiers,he spots one of his close friends dead in the middle of the parking lot.He begins to cry as he falls to his knees next to the body.
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Post by -Lexci- on Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:37 am

Hmmm. Interesting.
Might i suggest adding more detail to the beggining and instead of writing about all three men in each chapter, just foucus on one each chapter, so that your reader can remember the situation of each person better. =] other than that, just work a little more on the description and you're good to go my friend. ^^
Good story Dj. Very nice.
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Post by Canterbury on Wed Nov 18, 2009 4:53 pm

Wow, the voting system is messed up. I was able to select every one of every options.

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Post by DJ. on Wed Nov 18, 2009 10:32 pm

Yeah,that's not my fault Canter.

Well I never edited the first post for more detail like I did the others...my bad...
Chapter 8 up sometime in the next few days.

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Post by DJ. on Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:37 pm

Chapter 8

Jack wakes up from a good night's rest and quickly prepares his Jet for take-off. While the mechanics take a quick look at his jet,he runs to the Commander's office.
"Sir,I'm ready to take-off.When are leaving for the extraction?" He says calmly.
"Well,since your so eager to get going.I suppose we'll leave in about 15 minutes.Just give the rescue helicopter and crew some time to get ready. This mission is sure to be dangerous,so I've got back-up on an aircraft carrier less than about 10 miles from the chopper's crash site.Be careful,if you need support don't hesitate to ask.Good Luck,now go get our men back." The commander replies.
"Yes,sir. Thank you sir." Jack says walking back out to his jet,running through his pre-take off procedures.
The rescue crew and Jack take-off in the morning sun. Jack flies ahead of the rescue to scout the area. As soon as Jack enters the area,a ton of missiles appear above the tree line coming straight for him and the rescue chopper. He gets on the radio to the rescue crew,"Abort mission. I repeat abort mission. Heavy concentration of enemy fire coming straight for us. Bail out of the chopper,bring anything you can with you. This wasn't what I had in mind,but it will have to to considering. You've got about 5 minutes before the missiles get there.Alert command before bailing,I'll meet up with you on the ground. Over and out."
The rescue follows Jack's orders,and within a few minutes they are on the ground searching for the missing crew mates,if they aren't dead already....

(Sorry this Chapter wasn't so EPIC,I couldn't think of much else to write and still keep your attention.I'll add more later,that's all I could think of...DANG WRITERS BLOCK!)
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Re: Kings Of The Sky

Post by Metaforze on Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:32 pm

Great, I love it!

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Post by DJ. on Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:32 pm

During the evening hours,Jeremy looks around to check for guards passing by. He sees none and takes his gear and AK47 with him as he descends from the tree tops.He slowly and carefully advances making sure to watch out for guards and traps.While walking along he comes up on what appears to be prison for POWs.The entrance and prison itself are crawling with enemy guards,machine gun nests,and even a few guard dogs.Jeremy decides to look for another way in,he wanders around back and see almost the exact same thing at the front gate.He wonders to himself,"How will I get out of here alive." He takes out his short wave radio and whispers hoping to get a reply,"This is Jeremy,my plane was shot down a few days ago,can anyone hear me"?He gets no reply.He puts up his radio,and walks past the prison.He slowly walks through the forest when he walks into a clearing and his draw drops at the site.Before his eyes is the main base,with tanks rolling,soldiers everywhere,planes ready to take of,and tones of machine gun nests and turrets,spotlights included.Suddenly,a spotlight appears on Jeremy,the guards yell,"Intruder!Open fire at once!" Jeremy begins to run back into the forest dodging the rain of bullets from the machine guns and guards.A tank opens fire,as Jeremy runs for his life into the night sky.

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Tom runs to his car,he gets in and runs to the nearest military base.Once he arrives,he finds the a similar scene only less damage.He runs into the remains of the command office,"Sir,we need some planes if you've got any and weapons stat!My base has been severely bombed,we need to find out who did this." The commands replies,"Fine,take the planes and ammo we've got.Its not much,but it might help.Just be aware,that the assault may not be over.God Speed to you." Tom nods,He walks to load up his car with ammo and heads back to his destroyed base.He arrives back at base,hands out available ammo and tells everyone to get a car and follow him.Tom returns and fuels up the planes for take off. He watches as his fellow soldiers go into action. He returns to base to tend for the dead and wounded.Gripping his teeth as he returns to his good friend's body, He takes the body and begins digging a burial for it immediately with tears streaming down his face.

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